Looks a good buy?

[DrR]

http://www.pistonheads.com/sales/542506.htm

 

[fUbAr]

picture 5 looks great quality!

 

[JMR]

Spotless 182 Cup wheels with eagle F1 boots, plenty of thread.

Apart from typo, nice ad.....should go in no time

 

[DrR]

I know, don't know whats going on with that one.

 

[DrR]

Thread? Don't know what your on about

 

[Ads_172]

Looks good, not sure if I'd use the arty RS and headlight pics though. Think you may be better of with a couple of side-on and interior ones instead.

 

[DrR]

Yeah think i'll wack some better ones on, car needs a clean first though.

 

[Pep]

Thats a really s**t advert for a really nice car, to me an advert with so little thought puts me off.

 

[Merk]

Shame because a ph2 like that, with more miles than a ph1 like mine, which is about 6 months older, will sell for about 2k more haha.

Nice car though.

 

[DrR]

Thats a really s**t advert for a really nice car, to me an advert with so little thought puts me off.

How would you lay it out? Not being funny after advise.

Have someone coming to view it on tuesday

 

[cat171]

Maybe ad some more info on it to the ad ?
Also maybe look at chaging the pics, some of the 'arty' ones no ones interested in really, straight pics of the cars would work better (to me anyway)
Maybe put 2.0 in the title too so folk can search for the engine size ?

 

[DrR]

Here is my other advert
http://search.autotrader.co.uk/es-uk/www/cars/RENAULT+CLIO/Ne-2-4-5-6-7-8-27-44-49-53-61-64-67-103-133-146-236,N-17-19-4294966970-4294967142/advert.action?R=200822311182625&distance=6&postcod e=tf9+2jl&channel=CARS&make=RENAULT&model=CLIO&min _pr=4000&max_pr=5000&max_mileage=

 

[JMR]

Thread? Don't know what your on about

:approve:

Both ads look ok to me DrRollo.

Looks a nice car and the pics are fine.

Most important comments are there......FSH and CAMBELT & AUX BELT.
They are the main things that anyone who knows anything about Clios will be looking for in the advert.

 

[DrR]

^^^ exactly, don't need to put it's got air con etc as they should know!

 

[JMR]

^^^ exactly, don't need to put it's got air con etc as they should know!

Yeh,

A/C,C/C,P/S,ABS,ESP,TC,E/M,E/W,CDC,H/L,A/W,T/C,ALM/FSH...

Its like a bible of f*kin acronyms on some ads.

FPMSL, TBQFH

LOL

:lolup:

 

[DrR]

pmsl at some adverts from people on here listing things like window wipers lol.

 

[Pep]

Thats a really s**t advert for a really nice car, to me an advert with so little thought puts me off.

How would you lay it out? Not being funny after advise.

Have someone coming to view it on tuesday

I would list everything about the car to be honest, service dates and mileages etc, basically every plus point about the car, standard fit items are always good, fair enougha lot of people looking for a sport know what they want and are looking for, but there may also be people who don;t know and just stumble across the ad.

List it all in paragraphs etc.

I just think a well thought out ad with all the info helps to show the car has been looked after, instead of just the average person who has a run around micra, plus the fact when someone who is really interested in the car sees it they can see effort has been put into it.

 

[DrR]

Car is getting a good clean on tuesday so will take good pics and make a new advert then, need to look through all my receipts, have them pretty much for everything.

 

[Pep]

Cool, I just think its worth the effort.

Also, a late apology as I've just realised i've come across as a right arse!