Photography Website?

[Danny133]

What would you look for?

Trying to build mine but UBER stuck =/

www.danielnewmanphoto.co.uk

 

[SamP]

Didnt read any of the about me, but "I would like to think that I'm a vibrant young photographer with a new style. " stuck out like a sore thumb. Can only laugh at that! Site looks alright, I've only got a tumblr account, what I take every day gets posted and thats it.

 

[Gally]

I'm a vibrant young photographer with a new style"

That bit is good, the first bit isn't.

Also the header, your name should be the same font as the PHOTOGRAPHY word but bigger and maybe a little bolder. Looks childish.