Vauxhall Corsa VXR Light Painting Revisited

[Habitual]

So, after a reasonable first attempt at light painting the other week, me and my friend went out again last night.

Unfortunately, he never got the car cleaned, so I may end up re-shooting these.

Even so, I'm interested in people's opinions on my composition and results.

Again, I wanted two (#2, #3) of them to look more natural - as if painted by the light in the picture... But, with that said, I took the advice of many and tried a less light poluted spot. (#1)

1.

Farm by Tom Cash, on Flickr

2.

Dark Alley by Tom Cash, on Flickr

3.

Oldschool by Tom Cash, on Flickr

Thank you!

Tom.

 

[Dan...]

I'm no expert but I really like them

 

[Brazo]

Tom it might just be the angle of my laptop screen but the background parts look really underexposed with the shadow and sky areas 'blocking' up.

 

[Habitual]

Cheers Dan.

On all of them Brazo?

 

[Gandi69]

Seen these on twitter. Where was the last one taken?

 

[Habitual]

Tettenhall mate.

 

[Brazo]

Cheers Dan.

On all of them Brazo?

Yup

They actually look fine on my phone, solid blacks etc, maybe its the incrteased dynamic range of a latop screen or the angle its tilted at but yeah the shadows look quite blocky.