I criticised on flickr
Lol.. indeed!
I'll answer your points here as it stops Flickr convos!
Erm, I cut off the edge of the TV and the chair to try and give the photo definite edges; I tried leaving the whole TV in but it feels like the picture drops off to the left a bit.. hard to explain! I know what you mean though. I have a habit of not using negative space so might try and include that somehow next week.
It is very cluttered yeah, but I was trying to introduce as many aspects to control as possible.. light, textures, colours etc. so that's why. It won't make explore as it is boring, but I was trying to get the technical side right first.
As for the angle, I dunno.. messed around for a bit with different angles, but eventually settled on that. Probably because I wanted to use my new tripod tbh!
The other photos in my stream are alright, but I don't like how much post processing I've had to use to cover up weaknesses with them.
All a learning curve I suppose. This one isn't perfect either, there are blown highlights, it's not sharp everywhere and probably a bit under-exposed.
Think that about covers it.