My first photoshoot.... (not 56k)

[Gavin.]

My first attempt at taking some decent pics.

Let me know what you think, criticism welcome

 

[will.clio]

nice set of pics, what camera you using? good location too

 

[Fletcher]

Nice pics, the roads look good too.

 

[PM_Clio]

nice pics and location

 

[BenWall]

Nice but too much hdr are some.

What is it with hdr these days, everyones doing it.. natural photos ftw.

 

[Gavin.]

camera is nothing special its a 5.1 mp sony cybershot dsc-p93. Glad you like them

 

[Rhino172]

looking good...I'd look into the idea of the "rule of thirds" and stop cutting off the edgs of the car for a better pic....either the whole car or a specific section of the car like pic number 3...

5 7 and 8 are what i mean, you've just cut off the edges of the car...otherwise good effort

 

[Bash]

Mate they are good, keep taking photos and you'll get really good. Take them as you feal and do with them what ever you think looks good.

 

[GaryS]

I agree with Rhino about the cropping. Other things:

1. The tubing/chair or whatever it is distracts from the car, maybe move any stuff like that out of the shot
2. Consider using flash in such as pic 6 to light up the car but keep the background darkish with the dramatic colours
3. Also on pic 6, consider shooting from a lower angle to get your car outlined against the sky
4. I'm not a fan of obviously HDR'd pics

Good pics for your first shoot though and a nice location too.

 

[Gavin.]

cheers for the feedback guys, all is welcome

Also as pointed out above, i didnt even realise the tubing/chair was in the shot until i got them off of the camera, i will look next time.

 

[Aluco]

Whats HDR'ing and how can I do it?!

 

[GaryS]

Whats HDR'ing and how can I do it?!

There's a guide on HDR in the "sticky" part of this forum.

 

[Gavin.]

id never even heard of it until the other day. i love the effect though

 

[Gaz]

Looks good to me nice work

 

[Leeshez]

Nice piccys.