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Thoughts on my advert. Type r content

Few spelling/punctuation mistakes that need correcting.

What does the b pipe do?
 
No pics in afraid lol. Think my spalling is getting worse as I get older. I've probably missed bits out but never mind.
 
Lovely car.

Only thing I would say is you have 2 different prices listed. £4295/£4250 not that there is much in it.
 
Ive adjusted a few things since that link. Had one guy email me allready and his spelling was worse lol
 
Prices still seem to be all over the place. Some are advertised near mine but pre facelift with more miles.
 
I think there's too much of an emphasis on what mods you've done. I'd rather know more about its history and condition.

For me, service history is a big selling point. So I'd want to know when the services were carried out and at what mileage, it's also good to know who has done the work.

Get those spelling/grammar mistakes sorted too. It looks a bit rushed otherwise.

It's a good advert though mate, definitely better than 90% of others!
 
Tommo. said:
I think there's too much of an emphasis on what mods you've done. I'd rather know more about its history and condition.

For me, service history is a big selling point. So I'd want to know when the services were carried out and at what mileage, it's also good to know who has done the work.

Get those spelling/grammar mistakes sorted too. It looks a bit rushed otherwise.

It's a good advert though mate, definitely better than 90% of others!
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ive adjusted the advert since then, and yeah the history side should be made a bit clearer.
 
Didn't give the ad a good look over but the fact you've taken decent pics means you stand in good stead.
 
I like it on an advert when they take a Pic of all the receipts and when the service history is documented with mileage.

Looks like you have AC, I would put that into it too.
 
When I was looking for mine, it was really hard to find a red facelift with AC which wasn't over priced. Sure you will sell it easy.
 
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