Thoughts on my advert. Type r content

[imprezaworks]

http://www.pistonheads.com/classifi...ivic-mk6-type-r------------------2004/1615356

 

[Ray Gin]

Looks fine to me. What's next?

 

[imprezaworks]

Clio for track use, banger for daily.

 

[riz]

Few spelling/punctuation mistakes that need correcting.

What does the b pipe do?

 

[Stefan.]

Clio for track use, banger for daily.

They always come back

 

[imprezaworks]

Few spelling/punctuation mistakes that need correcting.

What does the b pipe do?

bpipe is the centre section. To be honest I copies and pasted it from ctro. Will give it another look over

 

[Ray Gin]

Clio for track use, banger for daily.

Oh was hoping for boost!

 

[imprezaworks]

Nah mate, been there and got the tshirt

 

[JaredHasNoBrain]

Nah mate, been there and got the tshirt

pic?
Seems decent, as echo'd a spelling error but seems good Hope it sells quickly

 

[imprezaworks]

No pics in afraid lol. Think my spalling is getting worse as I get older. I've probably missed bits out but never mind.

 

[Jack!]

Personally, I'd have it perfectly punctuated, but not sure how important other people consider that.

 

[Richyy182]

Quite tempted by if myself

 

[Richyy182]

*it

 

[Jay.S]

Lovely car.

Only thing I would say is you have 2 different prices listed. £4295/£4250 not that there is much in it.

 

[imprezaworks]

Ive adjusted a few things since that link. Had one guy email me allready and his spelling was worse lol

 

[imprezaworks]

Lovely car.

Only thing I would say is you have 2 different prices listed. £4295/£4250 not that there is much in it.

Another thing i've changed.

 

[JohnnyE]

Ad looks ok

​good luck with the sale

 

[Adamm.]

Ad looks ok

​good luck with the sale

This.

 

[imprezaworks]

Cheers guys

 

[leeds_182]

Looks good dude. GLWTS.

 

[imprezaworks]

Cheers jim. I think it must sense it's for sale as its driving spot on lol. Ah well.

 

[coleman]

Seems to be priced well, when I was looking last year, some of the prices were crazy.

 

[imprezaworks]

Prices still seem to be all over the place. Some are advertised near mine but pre facelift with more miles.

 

[Clart]

Didn't you have a track clio?

 

[Ol’ Tarby]

Ad looks ok. I'm tempted to sell mine aswell

 

[Lawro]

I'm quite tempted..

 

[Tommo.]

I think there's too much of an emphasis on what mods you've done. I'd rather know more about its history and condition.

For me, service history is a big selling point. So I'd want to know when the services were carried out and at what mileage, it's also good to know who has done the work.

Get those spelling/grammar mistakes sorted too. It looks a bit rushed otherwise.

It's a good advert though mate, definitely better than 90% of others!

 

[imprezaworks]

Didn't you have a track clio?

​lol, ish.

 

[imprezaworks]

I think there's too much of an emphasis on what mods you've done. I'd rather know more about its history and condition.

For me, service history is a big selling point. So I'd want to know when the services were carried out and at what mileage, it's also good to know who has done the work.

Get those spelling/grammar mistakes sorted too. It looks a bit rushed otherwise.

It's a good advert though mate, definitely better than 90% of others!

ive adjusted the advert since then, and yeah the history side should be made a bit clearer.

 

[Ash']

GLWTS I found when I sold my Prem it attracted some right idiots though.

 

[imprezaworks]

I'm awaiting those

 

[Gally]

Didn't give the ad a good look over but the fact you've taken decent pics means you stand in good stead.

 

[riz]

I like it on an advert when they take a Pic of all the receipts and when the service history is documented with mileage.

Looks like you have AC, I would put that into it too.

 

[Gally]

Needs a bit of finessing mate but far from bad.

 

[imprezaworks]

Will add some bits tomo, yeah the aircon thing was a bit of a fail

 

[Kyle 86]

Proper mint I love it

 

[imprezaworks]

Cheers.

 

[Mike_SE]

Looks good, makes me miss my pre-facelift ep3. Sure you will sell that in good time!

 

[riz]

When I was looking for mine, it was really hard to find a red facelift with AC which wasn't over priced. Sure you will sell it easy.

 

[imprezaworks]

Hope so.