Criticise my pictures.

[JackJack]

Here is a couple of quick pictures i took on a pretty basic point and shoot camera.

SAM_0107 by Jacko01, on Flickr

SAM_0112 by Jacko01, on Flickr

SAM_0111 by Jacko01, on Flickr

SAM_0110 by Jacko01, on Flickr

SAM_0109 by Jacko01, on Flickr

SAM_0108 by Jacko01, on Flickr

Haven't got the time/money/interest for expensive camera etc but still looking for some tips on how to take better pictures so constructive criticism is appreciated, thanks in advance.

 

[Bluebeard]

I'm on my phone and refuse to look at Flickr pictures. Pain in the ass!

Use photo bucket, just for me. Even though I know tha grand sum of f**k all about photography.

 

[TheEvilGiraffe]

Read the stickies.

Photos are perfect for a generic for sale ad.... however, things you've done wrong (IMO):

Looking down on the car.
Car right in the middle in every photo.
Nothing interesting apart from the car.
Car filling the frame.
Blanked the plates - doesn't look 'natural' as it wouldn't look like that if I was walking past.
Random things crashing the frame - 'road closed' sign etc.

 

[JackJack]

Ideal TEG thanks that was what i was looking for.

They were taken for a for sale add so that's good to hear.

I'll see what i can do tomorrow Dan.

 

[DB.]

If they are for a sale ad, I would include the registration on them.

Nothing more annoying than an advert with blanked out plates IMO.

 

[Habitual]

 

[DrR]

Those pictures are f**king w**k

Edit, doh just read you wanted constructive critisisum

 

[JJ!]

They look like standard ad style pics taken with a standard camera. If that's what you wanted that's what you have.

As mentioned, if you want them for anything else, just better framing and angles would do wonders.

 

[Ben10]

Maybe some simple photo editing to bring out the colours a bit more?

 

[Niall]

I did a quick edit on the first one for you. Even this contrast, crop and a little vignette adjustment makes it look 10x better. But as for the original images try some more interesting compositions if you want to take good photos of your car, these are fine for an advertisement but seems as you’re asking for criticism I’m guessing they were supposed to be nice photos rather than just getting the job done advert photos.